There was a hope once,
inside a living thing.
Now, a cold moment
in the empty air is her
refusal to say “Goodbye”.
22 October 2008
This was a homework exercise with Paula, set at our regular creative writing workshop. It was her choice of topic, and as Halloween was coming up, she thought it wld be fun to do something "spooky". I suppose this was my "take" on what ghosts are?
About Me
- Shieh Jen Li
- I'm a time-rich/money poor, single mother. I mostly write haiku, because I like the discipline of the form. I had hardly written anything for years, and it took some terrible events in April 2007, which led to the end of my marriage, to start me writing again. That was the start of a sequence of poems about my divorce, which I have called "Separate Ways". I think each poem can stand on its own, but it is also an unfolding (and as yet, unfinished) story. I have found the haiku form stops me from getting over-emotional and "gushy". It took several months before I wrote about anything else, but when I did ("Summer Solstice"), it felt like a really big step. I think the style and subject matter of my "non-divorce poems" are also influenced by the fact that I am quite a keen photographer, so a lot of them are purely observational, and are about things that caught my eye, because they were quirky or ironic. I believe that my poems are carefully crafted, and I think very hard about every single word (well, you have to, when most of them are only 17 syllables long!). By the way, the photo was taken, while I was actually writing the poems on 8 October 2008!
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