With pigeons - evenly spaced like gargoyles
On a Gothic cathedral.
Works his way [sidles/shuffles] along the ridge pole,
Forcing/skittling his grey companions [out of his way]
Onto the lower slopes/tiles,
Until he is at the far end,
Alone.
2 March 2008
This obviously still needs a lot of work, but I thought it might be interesting for people (if anyone reads this!) to see how I work... I did consider "Apartheid" as a title, but thought it was too unsubtle?
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